Neliel

Hey there friend! I found this artwork while browsing the critiquables and it caught my eye.

I think you did a really good job on capturing lady Nel.

The expression is very seductive, well I think the picture as a whole could be declared to be just that <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

Your linework is very clean and pretty. I like how you changed the lineweight to accentuate certain features, it makes the picture much more dynamic and interesting when someone uses different lineweight <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

Im sure I did not say anything you didnt already know, but I cant say much more <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> I think it serves its purpose perfectly as a lineart. I'd be really interested to see this in full colour <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

I hope you find this at least a little useful ^^

Peace!